A blog for Fall 2015 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
Monday, November 16, 2015
Nazar - Updated Branding Materials
Hi all -
I have updated the branding collateral based on feedback. I brought out the colors from the design brief and made them significantly more front and center. More feedback is always welcome.
Hey Dan, These edits are fantastic—I really love the bold pop of colours! You were very successful in playing around with them without it feeling very overwhelming and I really like your use of the colour bars and small circle elements throughout the designs.
The only super minor suggestion I have is to add the website address onto your business cards!
You can really see the difference between your new design and the old and it does make everything pop more. I really like that the color of the envelope, letterhead and notebook are centered in the color bar.
I think you might have forgotten to update the letterhead in the third pic or if you wanted it that way.
The 3rd image looks familiar, as if it was part of the older design. It fits perfectly fine within this brand... I'm just not sure what it will be used for. But... I'm sure you have a use for it - or will find one. The designs are consistent, colorful, highly saturated and SHOUT out your company's existence. You are traveling in a new direction with this... and it will be interesting to see if you can sustain this high-octane design for the brochure/folder/etc. I hope so - it's quite wonderful.
Dan these are looking really good. I really think that the color adds a nice element. I agree with Tania you might want to add your website to your business card. I also think the boldness of the envelope at first was like “woahhhhh” too bright but now that I think about it, I love it. It is like the one envelope I would go straight for it when I get all my mail. So it think it works great in an eye-catching way. Also, I would shrink down the point size down on your letterhead it’s a little too over powering. Great work here and keep it up. I really think these color elements will play well into the designing of your brochure and make it something unique and much different than many others who are in competition.
I absolutely love these, the contrast between the large bold bright colors and the thin white lines work beautifully together. I agree with the others about the website, you could definitely make a next-level really modern website with these ideas in place, great work!
Hey Dan,
ReplyDeleteThese edits are fantastic—I really love the bold pop of colours! You were very successful in playing around with them without it feeling very overwhelming and I really like your use of the colour bars and small circle elements throughout the designs.
The only super minor suggestion I have is to add the website address onto your business cards!
You can really see the difference between your new design and the old and it does make everything pop more. I really like that the color of the envelope, letterhead and notebook are centered in the color bar.
ReplyDeleteI think you might have forgotten to update the letterhead in the third pic or if you wanted it that way.
The 3rd image looks familiar, as if it was part of the older design. It fits perfectly fine within this brand... I'm just not sure what it will be used for. But... I'm sure you have a use for it - or will find one. The designs are consistent, colorful, highly saturated and SHOUT out your company's existence. You are traveling in a new direction with this... and it will be interesting to see if you can sustain this high-octane design for the brochure/folder/etc. I hope so - it's quite wonderful.
ReplyDeleteDan these are looking really good. I really think that the color adds a nice element. I agree with Tania you might want to add your website to your business card. I also think the boldness of the envelope at first was like “woahhhhh” too bright but now that I think about it, I love it. It is like the one envelope I would go straight for it when I get all my mail. So it think it works great in an eye-catching way. Also, I would shrink down the point size down on your letterhead it’s a little too over powering. Great work here and keep it up. I really think these color elements will play well into the designing of your brochure and make it something unique and much different than many others who are in competition.
ReplyDeleteHey Dan,
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love these, the contrast between the large bold bright colors and the thin white lines work beautifully together. I agree with the others about the website, you could definitely make a next-level really modern website with these ideas in place, great work!
- David Perricone