A blog for Fall 2015 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
Tuesday, December 1, 2015
Perricone update pt 2
Been working on this since I posted last, added a little core-organization and color, let me know what you think of the updated versus the past, thanks!
Hi David, Your brochure is looking good so far. I’m a little concerned about text overload. The paragraph is so dense that it doesn’t seem very inviting to read. Luckily, it’s still dummy text so you wouldn’t be cutting anything out, but once you gather the information you want to include, I suggest aiming for a more brief explanation in each section.
I also suggest playing around a bit with some type hierarchy—perhaps a pull quote somewhere or some line treatment. (I like the circles and lines from “brochure design 2” in your previous posting.
Is there a front and back to the brochure? It would be nice to see a page with your logo and possibly contact information or “about the company”
David - see my comments on your previous posts. I'm not convinced these versions are a step forward. I stand by my comments on last post. Be careful not to step too far away from your established color palette... it's important that the pocket folder holds a unified campaign... and color is the foundation of that.
Hi David,
ReplyDeleteYour brochure is looking good so far. I’m a little concerned about text overload. The paragraph is so dense that it doesn’t seem very inviting to read. Luckily, it’s still dummy text so you wouldn’t be cutting anything out, but once you gather the information you want to include, I suggest aiming for a more brief explanation in each section.
I also suggest playing around a bit with some type hierarchy—perhaps a pull quote somewhere or some line treatment. (I like the circles and lines from “brochure design 2” in your previous posting.
Is there a front and back to the brochure? It would be nice to see a page with your logo and possibly contact information or “about the company”
David - see my comments on your previous posts. I'm not convinced these versions are a step forward. I stand by my comments on last post. Be careful not to step too far away from your established color palette... it's important that the pocket folder holds a unified campaign... and color is the foundation of that.
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