A blog for Fall 2015 NEiA Advanced Layout class with instructor, Coni Porter. The purpose is to offer faculty and peer feedback in a timely manner, allowing and encouraging the students to progress in a focused and productive way.
Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Bains_Revisions
Here is my stationary and folded brochure and mockup this is not my finalized posting please give me any feedback for anything so I can post it tomorrow Thanks!
Izzy, I think my feedback given on previous post still stands for the version I see here. So – I’ll keep my comments centered on the identity items. The letterhead is really strong. Nice. I’m reading the invitation – and see some strange capitalization. Let’s make sure to review this in Portfolio class next semester. The last little word “artists” is too short as it sits all by itself at the very bottom. That is what I would call a “weak foundation.” Either fill out the line, or eliminate it. Business Card: CEO is all caps. Otherwise – the design looks quite nice.
Izzy, I think my feedback given on previous post still stands for the version I see here. So – I’ll keep my comments centered on the identity items. The letterhead is really strong. Nice. I’m reading the invitation – and see some strange capitalization. Let’s make sure to review this in Portfolio class next semester. The last little word “artists” is too short as it sits all by itself at the very bottom. That is what I would call a “weak foundation.” Either fill out the line, or eliminate it. Business Card: CEO is all caps. Otherwise – the design looks quite nice.
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